Ten Months
Cold and undisturbed waters
Approximately three hundred thirty-four days
A slight bump
Shaking
On to turbulent waters
A variety of faces
A lot of new faces
Great big smiles
Fronting their untroubled minds
A rubber raft
Violent water
Uninvited guests
Silence
Seconds away from the world above
Flowing water
A held breath
Daylight
Rougher bumps
A wilder ride
Trying to escape
This white water rapid ride
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Posted by jai on March 10, 2010 at 11:45 pm
hahaha! Thanks to Camille’s mini-lesson! I am now equipped to interpret this poem. Should I write it on my stop and jot notebook or post it here? hehehe…
Posted by atwistedbrainiac on March 10, 2010 at 11:50 pm
post it here. so what do you think is this poem all about?